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Silent Silvers (Pls read da description)

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This is the story of a girl named Andrea Silvers. She is 19 years old.Since young, she has been seeing abnormal creatures and things  especially when enraged.When enraged,her vison becomes blurry and filled with gore.What did not help was the fact that she had a quick temper.Everytime she is enraged,her vision became even more blurry and gruesome than before and she would lose control of her whole being.
She was often a loner at school as she did not talk much,she only had a few friends.Her parents would torment her with insults everyday.She kept herself occupied by drawing mainly demonic pictures as she felt that only 'they' under stood her.She always tried to keep her cool and she usually did so miraculously.Her father was an alcolholic so everynight,when he returned he would be drunk and he would be beating up his children.Andrea always did her best in trying to shield her brother,Sam,from her father's attacks.
But one day her life changed forever when she was being falsely accused by her friend,Tina, for accidentally crumpling her worksheet after school.Tina kept insisting that Andrea had indeed crumpled her woorksheet on purpose even though Andrea was actually innocent of the act.Then, when tina called Andrea a liar,all hell broke lose.Andrea grabbed her 30cm metal ruler from her desk and attacked.Andrea now engulfed with rage,covered Tina's mouth with one hand and thrusted the ruler into her abdomen with the other causing Tina to cough up blood. After a few minutes of multiple stabs,before Tina finally drew her last breath and perished,Andrea put a finger to her lips and said”sssshhhhh”. Andrea slumped the corspe over her shoulder and stashed it in her locker.As Andrea was closing the locker she came back to her senses as she saw the gruesome corspe in her locker,she yelped in fright and slammed the  locker shut.
Andrea grabbed all her belongings and fled the school through the back door. Andrea ran to the nearby river and hid herself there as  there were some bushes.She sat at the riverbank and wept still tramautised by the bloody scene she kept asking herself about why she did she kill Tina until a thought flashed across her mind: It wasn't my fault she died,fate just decided that her punishment would come then.It was just fate.
Andrea chuckled at the thought as she washed herself of the blood with the river water. However , she could not get rid of the blood stains on her shirt so she took a big book from her bag and held it infront of her as she walked home.
When she first entered the door, as expected, her mother would yell at her for coming home late.”I just needed to stay back in school to complete something”Andrea lied as she walked past her mother who yelled at her again to go quickly take a bath.
While Andrea was taking her bath,she thought about the day's happenings and said” I wonder what punishment fate has to offer my parents...”
That night while her father was giving her an earful for no apparent reason as he was drunk,Andrea was holding in all her anger and hatred towards her father and mother. Finally when her mother sent her to bed,Andrea stormed off.
That night however, she could not sleep she was thinking about all the hatred she had for her parents and wished their punishment for torturing her everyday would come sooner then suddenly,she remembered her words by the river and a smiled crept up her face as she cackled”Maybe I'll give fate a helping hand and quicken their punishments.” with that she grabbed her metal ruler.
A few days later,
           “This is a news report of a murder that happened recently. Two parents Mr and Mrs Silvers,51 and 42, and their son Sam Silvers,12,were found dead  in their house. Sam was shot in the head while holding a gun suspected suicide and Mr and  Mrs Silvers stabbed to death.A few days ago at around 1am, a neighbour heard gunshots coming from the Silvers household and  immediately called the police.Before the police arrived, she noticed a teenage girl suspected to be the murderer, with a bag slung over her shoulder wearing a pale purple hoodie holding something long and silver running out of the house.The prime suspect Andrea Silvers is still currently missing.”
This is the creepypasta for my OC Silent Silvers
I know it sucks but its my first one so no hate.
You can use her but pls credit me
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Notadrugdealer's avatar
This story has quite afew cliches in it like abusive parents, loner, psychological shit. Perhaps maybe change it up a bit. The character seems too much like Clockwork and Ticci Tobi combined. Your story has potential but not executed well. Since she is into demonic shit she could be possessed by a demon, that could work. Also, why did she kill her brother? That was unneeded. I'm not trying to be mean but I kind of sound that way, sorry.